(完整版)英语短文写作句子改错练习_高级综合英语(含答案)

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英语短文写作句子改错练习<2>

1．指代方面

1）Sometimes teachers will inform students

of the heavy burden they have to bear.

改为:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the

heavy burden the students have to bear.

2）People have been fighting against the

influence of TV commercials, but it often

proves useless.

改为:People have been fighting against the

influence of TV commercials, which

often proves useless.

3)

Television provides us with a vivid,

colorful world, which enables us to enjoy

life thoroughly.

改为:Television, which enables us to enjoy

life thoroughly,provides us with a

vivid, colorful world.

2．修饰方面

1）To keep the air clean, we must

move the factories which give off

poisonous gases to the countryside.

改为:To keep the air clean, we must

move the factories which give off

poisonous gases, to the countryside.

2）Without television, people can't get

information which comes from other

parts of the world immediately.

改为:Without television, people can't

immediately get information which

comes from other parts of the world.

At the age of six, my father began to

teach me English.

3）When I was six, my father began to

teach me English.

改为:4)

Having carried out

economic reforms in our

country, people's living

standard has greatly

improve

改为:Having carried out economic reforms in our

country, people have greatly improved living

standard.

To improve one's writing skill, regular

practice is essential.

5)

To improve one's writing skill,

we need regular practice.

3．平行方面

1）While we reduce the number of

vehicles, the speed of traffic can be

increased.

改为:改为:While the number of vehicles is

reduced, the speed of traffic can be

increased.

The price of milk isn' t

higher than grain.

2）The price of milk isn' t higher than

that of grain.

改为:

The energy problem is currently of great

concern to a nation, the world, and

human beings.

改为:The energy problem is currently of

great concern to a nation, to the

world, and to human beings.

4）But other people argue that everyone has

a certain opportunity and a wise man

will never lose it whenever it arises.

改为:But other people argue that everyone

has a certain opportunity and that a

wise man will never lose it whenever

it arises.

3）5）Before I selected the new course, my

teacher warned me of the difficulty of

the course and how long it lasted.

改为:Before I selected the new course,

my teacher warned me of the

difficulty of the course and of the

length of it.

Making cities greener has a lot of

advantages, such as its improvement of

6）

our environment, its contribution to our

industry and its making our cities

beautiful.

改为:Making cities greener has a lot

of advantages, such as its

improvement of our environ-ment, its contribution to our

industry and its beautification

of our cities

4. 语法方面

1）Narrow streets easily cause to happen

many traffic accidents.

改为:Narrow streets easily cause many traffic

accidents.

2）A great change has been taken

place since then.

改为:A great change has taken place

then.

3）But it may occur some new

problems.

改为:But some new problems may occur.

4）Opportunities are only belonged to

those who work hard.

改为:Opportunities only belong to those who

work hard.

5）Green trees can protect our air from

polluting.

改为:Green trees can protect our air from being

polluted.

6）Comparing with other countries,

China pays little attention to the

energy problem.

改为:Compared with other countries, China pays

little attention to the energy problem.

5. 搭配方面

1）However the speed of a car is much

faster than that of a bicycle.

改为：However the speed of a car is much

higher than that of a bicycle.

2）In the past the price of milk was so

expensive that most families could

not afford it.

改为:In the past the price of milk was so high

that most families could not afford it.

3）We should study/learn as much

knowledge as possible so that we can be

fully prepared for the future.

改为:We should get as much knowledge as

possible so that we can be fully prepared for

the future.

4）The opportunity to be promoted in a

joint venture will be smaller if one

cannot speak English.

改为:The opportunity to be promoted in a joint

venture will be less if one cannot speak Eng-lish.

6. 赘言问题

1）改为:In my opinion, I believe the free

medical system is in need of reform.

People try to find a solution to

solve the problem.

2）改为:In my opinion, the free medical

system is in need of reform.

People try to find a solution to the

problem.

3) Many visitors who visit our city have

the impression that there are few trees

in the street.

改为:Many visitors of our city have the

impression that there are few trees

in the street.

The reason why people choose to live

in the country is because there is no

pollution or noise there.

改为:The reason why people choose to

live in the country is that there is

no pollution or noise there.

5)1 have to rewrite my composition again.

改为:1 have to rewrite my composition.

4)

7. 汉化问题

1）Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons

My level of English has thus been

improved.

2）is that Shanghai has over ten million people.

改为:Traffic is a serious problem, one of the

reasons is that there are over ten million

people in Shanghai.

改为:My English has thus been improved.

3）Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are

becoming more and more.

改为:Nowadays more and more young

people seek to go abroad.

4)

With the development of cities, green

land becomes more and more less.

5)

改为:With the development of cities, there is less and

Smoking will do harm to our body.

改为:Smoking will do harm to heath.

less green land.

We should put out hearts into the study.

改为:We should pay attention to the study

6)

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