Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting导学案-高中英语人教版(5)_

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Unit 1 Teenage life Reading for Writing

How to write a letter of advice

Step1:Lead in

What problems do you have in your daily life?

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Free talk

Facing these problems, how will you seek for help ?

municating sincerely face to face

turning to trustworthy friends for help

asking for advice on social media

writing a letter to a professional adviser

ringing help hotlines

Reading

Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. She gave a

reply.

Read her reply and discuss the questions on your book.

Whilewriting

1. Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.

1 Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible

suggestions and reasons.

2. Draft your letter according to the outline below.

Word about making suggestions

（提建议）

suggest /sə'dʒest/ v.建议，提议

suggest that sb (should) do sth

suggest doing sth

I suggest that you______(talk) to your friend about his behaviour.

I suggest_________(go) home.

remend /rekə'mend/ v.劝告，建议

remend that sb (should) do sth

remend sb to do sth

remend doing sth

三维写作提能

建议信——如何适应新的学校生活

第一步 练单句——词句优美,吸引眼球

1.听说你难以适应新的校园生活,我为你感到担心。

Hearing that you have trouble adapting to life in the new campus, I am concerned

about you.

2. 像你一样的新生总是对很多事情感到困惑,这是很常见的。

It is not unusual for a freshman like you to be confused about many things.

3. 我建议你不要独自度过太多的时间。

I remend you not to spend too much time alone.

第二步 组语篇——文从字顺,赏心悦目

Dear Tom,

Hearing that you have trouble adapting to life in the new campus,I am concerned

about suggestions are as follows:

Firstly, it is not unusual for a freshman like you to be confused about many

ly, I remend you not to spend too much time alone.I think it useful for

you to sign up for a club and take part in more extracurricular but not

least, focus on your study and give others a hand actively and you are sure to survive

the hard time.

I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into g forward to

your early reply.

典例剖析

假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面的提示

给她写一封信。

1．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；

2．要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；

3．友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。

注意：词数80左右。

审题谋篇

Ⅰ．定框架 →好的开始，成功的一半

Ⅰ．定要点、关键词及动词时态 →打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作

文

要点一：知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(宾语从句)

I am sorry to know __________________________________________.

要点二：如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to do)

The situation __________________if you take my advice.

要点三：要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。(主谓结构)

If you want to make friends, _____________________

要点四：你要和朋友同甘共苦。

You should __________________________________________.

要点五：患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。

A friend __________ is a friend __________.

要点六：友谊需要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)

Friendship ______________________________.

写作常用词汇

1．have 在……有些麻烦

2．与……交流

3．feel lonely感到孤独

4．ask for 就……征求建议

5．suggestion n．建议

6．overe v．克服

7．get along well with和……相处很好

8．make it做到

9．make friends交朋友

10．as far as I am concerned/in my opinion就我而言/在我看来

[常用语句]

精彩开头

1．I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty in…

2．I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ....

3．I am writing to share some advice with you.

4．I am writing to express my views

5．You have asked for some and I will try to give you my suggestions.

6．However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. /

Here are a few suggestions.

正文佳句

1．First(ly), why not ...? If you do this, ...

2．Secondly, you should / can ... Then / That way, ...

3．Thirdly, I think it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...

4．Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) ...

5．In my opinion，it would be

6．I suggest that

7．In my opinion，you'

8．If I were you，

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